Sep 152012
 

On behalf of the organisers, family and friends of Svetlana, we want to thank each person who participated in this kukai.

Each person brings something of themselves when reading another’s haiku, finding in it something that resonates with their own experience, identity and regional milieu.  Each haiku has something of a transactional nature between reader and writer that kukai events foster.

It is not just the poetic merit of any individual haiku that is being measured in a kukai but how the poet has explored the kukai theme drawing on their own experience, identity and regional milieu..  Time is ultimately the final arbiter of merit and memorability.

Congratulations to Sheila Windsor for attracting the most points from other poets participating in this Svetlana Marisova Memorial Kukai.

A signed copy of “Be Still and Know” by Svetlana Marisova and Ted van Zutphen has been generously donated by Ted for this kukai and will be sent to Sheila.

The haiku are listed in order of total points received from participating voters.  Each haiku listed is followed by its author’s name, and then by a three digit code indicating the number of 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point votes were cast for the poem by the other participating poets – followed by a tally of the points received.

(1,4,6) = 17pts would indicate that the poem above received one 3-point vote, four 2-point votes, and six 1-point votes for a final tally of 17 points.

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1st Place – 22 Points
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lullaby…
a turtle tracks back
to the ocean

Sheila Windsor
(3,5,3) = 22 pts

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2nd Place – 18 Points
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each falling leaf
opens a blue crack
of sky

Sondra J Byrnes
(1,4,7) = 18 pts

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3rd Place – 17 Points
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passing clouds
the scent of honeysuckle
in a crow’s wings

Christine L. Villa
(2,4,3) = 17 pts

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4th Place – 14 Points
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twilight breeze…
suddenly your words too
become limpid

Ted van Zutphen
(1,5,1) = 14 pts

cicada song
a warm breeze twists
the hanging moss

Paula Moore
(1,5,1) = 14 pts

ancient pond –
at the tip of a crow’s beak
the universe

Don Baird
(1,3,5) = 14 pts

furled tulips-
she paints the wind
with words

Pamela Cooper
(1,3,7) = 14 pts

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5th Place – 12 Points
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just after sunset
so blue the odor
of honeysuckle

Ed Bremson
(2,1,4) = 12 pts

fragile sky . . .
a hawk screaming red
to blue

Mark Brager
(1,2,5) = 12 pts

approaching thunder
the turquoise tang
of a faraway sea

Sandi Pray
(2,1,4) = 12 pts

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6th Place – 11 Points
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September dusk —
wishing I could see
just one more firefly

Paul David Mena
(0,4,3) = 11 pts

 

peach leaves
joining the fireflies
I listen to the sunset

Tore Sverredal
(1,2,4) = 11 pts

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7th Place – 10 Points
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soul boat —
waves of silence
in gold leaf

Stella Pierides
(0,3,4) = 10 pts

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8th Place – 9 Points
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from tumbled stones
to river’s flow the change
of melody

Susan Shand
(0,3,3) = 9 pts

full moon halo …
the nightingale sings
with a silver tongue

Sandip Sital Chauhan
(0,4,1) = 9 pts

late summer –
a gossamer unites
the rose and its thorn

Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
(0,2,5) = 9 pts

tasting the air
the wind tastes of me —
carnival cloud

Kent Dorsey
(1,2,2) = 9 pts

a leaf
on the black branch
meditating

Tuvshinzaya Nergui
(1,2,2) = 9 pts

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9th Place – 8 Points
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cherry blossoms…
a poet’s voice
in the bellbird’s song

Mary Sheridan
(0,3,2) = 8 pts

golgotha . . .
a dove flying through its
own whiteness

Robert D. Wilson
(1,1,3) = 8 pts

milky way…
a packet of starburst
in my mouth

Jayashree Maniyil
(1,1,3) = 8 pts

with one breath the mourning dove’s high coo

Johnny Baranski
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

pomegranate
one can do so many
good little deeds

André Surridge
(0,3,2) = 8 pts

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10th Place – 7 Points
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moon’s breath
on the dog rose . . .
newborn fawn

Claire Everett
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

rainforest…
a satin bowerbird sings
the dance of blue

Carole Harrison
(0,3,1) = 7 pts

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11th Place – 6 Points
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the songs
of migrating swallows
blue fog lingers

Patricia Sullivan
(0,3,0) = 6 pts

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12th Place – 5 Points
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singing dawn . . .
searching for your light
within these words

Kirsten Cliff
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

among butterflies your song colors the milky way

Asni Amin
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

dark clouds shroud
the almost full moon
for a moment

Victor Gendrano
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

cold egg . . .
the warmth of a
cuckoo’s song

Chuluun Sodoo
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

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13th Place – 4 Points
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out of the darkness
her memory lingers
a wall of tears

Isabelle Loverro
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

the loon’s
silvern voice
scatters the fog

Veronika Novak
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

temple bell–
the deaf listens to
colorless sound

Pravat Kumar Padhy
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

lonesome summer sky
the secret of endless youth
hiding in your star

Sasa Vazic
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

morning sun
brightening by sound of
falling dew

Nadalaa P
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

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14th Place – 3 Points
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sunlit dew –
everyone, everywhere
is me

Paul Smith
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

on old sage
a silenced beetle…
time to rest

Julija Naskova
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

days shorten –
by a fence the splintered handle
of her axe

Elaine Andre
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

Autumn glory …
the soothing sound of the moon
touches the lake

Ramona
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

if not for this puddle
a lost glimpse
of wonder

Andrea Grillo
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

falling snow
on my shoulders, is my property
until melting

Ido.N
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

faded violet
your beauty still feeds
my famished eyes

Pat Geyer
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

the eye I see
tolls red tolls red
to hell

Ralf Bröker
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

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15th Place – 2 Points
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red tomato…
a homeless tastes
the universe

Ernesto P. Santiago
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

blue moonlight
touching her nameplate
how sweet it cuts

Angelo B. Ancheta
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

Wind: blows strong and weak
Angels wings unseen beating
The world basks in breeze

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh / Thomas Carty
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

nostalgia-
white roses shining
in the long night

tousita Sama
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

un goût de sel sur les lèvres…
face à l’aéroport
la Rivière des Pluies

{a salty taste on the lips …
facing the airport
the River of Rains}

vincent Hoarau
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

planting tulip bulbs …
the wet earth dreams
of a new spring

Ella Wagemakers
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

this small ache
and all the rain too
a robin’s subsong

Alan Summers
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

autumn wind
the fir unable to restrain
the cardinal’s song

Kat Creighton
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

eloquent moonlight
her rhythmic and profound words
still touch my soul

Lisa Hills
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

red chrysanthemums
fade to white at first bloom…
mournful music

Ida Freilinger
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

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16th Place – 1 Point
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beneath my bare feet
the concrete surface of man —
above me sky

Debbie Guzzi
(0,0,1) = 1 pt

morning hush
a dog shakes off
pink dew

Pris Campbell
(0,0,1) = 1 pt

Cricket and frog song,
heartbeat of late summer’s night,
the full moon exhales.

Anya Harris
(0,0,1) = 1 pt

with beauty perched
arms roost the blessed wings
enjoying her song

Tim Imhoff
(0,0,1) = 1 pt

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No Points Awarded
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yellow leaves blooming
around the apple tree’s roots –
scarecrows idle

Liliana Negoi

spring tide
again, a sea of garbage
is washed ashore

mr. willie r. bongcaron

Morning fog lifting
Butterfly on a flower
Eagle leaves its nest

Ron Kleiman

summer wind
moon on the sea
heart breaking

Rayan Wilson

kaleidoscope –
in the game a child beholds
a whole new world

Gillena Cox

Autumn seems such a sad end;
– Yet, Summer was full!
There will be another Spring…

Alan Montgomery

moonlight
stars exclaiming in beauty of
leaves

Burenbileg Batsuuri

molten eyes
a soul shivers
under a cold gaze

Brian McMullen

the autumn is shaking
like winter wheat
tighten with ice

Tatjana Debeljacki